by Ginger Dehlinger
I
love, and that is not an exaggeration, my critique group. Having a group of
people to read what I write and then help me make it better is almost as
important to me as my thesaurus. I have no idea who is following my blog at
this point, but if you are a writer, I highly recommend you either join an
existing critique group or create one of your own.
If you haven't been in a critique group before, my writing group, Central Oregon Writer's Guild, has developed the following guidelines:
If you haven't been in a critique group before, my writing group, Central Oregon Writer's Guild, has developed the following guidelines:
Asking for Feedback
- Identify your needs clearly: "Do you feel my character's emotion?" "Is my dialogue realistic?" "I'm sending this to an agent. Please review line by line for a final polish."
- Ask open-ended questions: "What do you think of the ending?" "What is confusing?"
- Listen to the entire critique without interrupting: If you've heard the same feedback before, be patient. If you disagree, make notes to reflect upon later. Refrain from defending or explaining what you meant. Remain as objective as possible; try not to take comments personally. Be discerning about conflicting advice. Learn to take the best and leave the rest.
- Ask for clarification if you don't understand a comment.
- Remember that all work can be improved; all art is unfinished.
Critiquing the work of others:
critique the work, never the writer
- Use the session for content and story development. Note mechanical issues (grammar, punctuation, spelling) for later review/editing.
- Respect other styles of writing; refrain from rewriting something the way you would.
- Give praise first.
- Give specific examples of both what works and what doesn't.
- Present feedback as part of a continuing process. "Working, almost working" is better than "good, bad."
- Phrase suggestions as what ifs: "What if you added some dialogue to that scene?" "What if you showed your character is angry instead of saying he's angry?"
- Offer comments objectively, not personally: Rather than, "I don't like this scene," say, "This scene stopped the momentum."
- Refrain from comparing work to other stories or poems you've read.
- Remember that you may only be reading part of the story and comment accordingly.
- Let the writer reveal if the manuscript is based on his own life story.
- Is there a hook that pulls the reader in?
- How are character motivations revealed? Do the characters have distinctive voices?
- Does the dialogue sound natural? Is there a difference between narrative and dialogue?
- Is there continuity in the story line?
- Does the story keep readers' attention? Is there tension? Successful transitions?
- Are internal and external conflicts developed?
- Is point of view clearly established and maintained?
- What themes are emerging?
- Are plot and subplots clear, and is there a satisfying conclusion?
- Is the backstory woven in or is there an information dump?
- When does the real story begin?
- Is present tense or past tense consistently maintained?
- If there is a real problem with the manuscript, offer to meet privately.
- Give others a chance to comment.
- After receiving feedback, remember to say thank you.
-------------------- Ginger Dehlinger is a native Oregonian who writes poetry, essays, and short stories set in the American West. She’s written one novel, Brute Heart, a coming-of-age story that centers on alcoholism, assisted dying, and love for animals. A second novel, not a sequel, is still in progress. A Phi Beta Kappa graduate of the University of Oregon, Ginger lives in Bend, Oregon with her husband, Richard and a cat named Cali.
